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So, I enrolled a class in HACKERS ACADEMY which is the best institute in KOREA for toefle test. And I took a year off to get a good score in toefle. After 5 months later, I got 99/120 score and I finally could be an exchange student. I was choosen as an exchange student of THE UNIVERSITY OF HULL that situated in U.K. I am really excited about this event, and now I earn money by teaching elementary & high school students. Sometimes it makes me tired but it usually gives me good, bright feeling as they have passion in their leaning.

Hi Sally! I congratulate you for passing your TOEFL. You had a good score and it’s just right for you to be chosen as an Exchange Student for that University. You deserve it! I wish you all the best. I know that you can do everything. I noticed that once you liked something, you are determined to have it. So no matter what it takes, you will really succeed. And I guess that is one good characteristic a person must have in learning English. Moreover, I’m impressed of you! You are smart and I believe that you can do great in everything! Have a great day ahead! Take care!   Teacher Abby “_)    Here are my corrections for you: dear.tutor2 >> Dear Teacher: >> Hi Teacher!>> Hello Abby! So, I enrolled a class in HACKERS ACADEMY which is the best institute in KOREA for toefle test. >> CORRECT (Just make sure your spelling is correct) >> TOEFL not toefle And I took a year off to get a good score in toefle. >> TOEFL not toefle After 5 months later, I got 99/120 score and I finally could be an exchange student. >> After 5 months, I got a score of 99 over 120 and I finally have the chance to be an exchange student. >> 5  months later, I got a score of 99/120 so I could finally become an exchange student I was choosen as an exchange student of THE UNIVERSITY OF HULL that situated in U.K. >> I was chosen as an exchange student of The University of Hull which is situated in the UK. I am really excited about this event, and now I earn money by teaching elementary & high school students. >> I am really excited about this so I’m earning money now by teaching Elementary and High School students. Sometimes it makes me tired but it usually gives me good, bright feeling as they have passion in their leaning. >> It sometimes makes me tired but I usually feel good when I see my students having more passion in learning.