Dear. Vaness
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you doing my tutor hehe.
See you soon.
I had worked an an english academy as a teacher.
I taught basic english to prumary school students so it wasen't difficult.
Whule i was working i learned about how to have an innocent way of thinking.
Nevertheless l had to ought to teach children who are not intersted in english.
I really understand what their feeling because i did when i was young.
So i tried to teach like that introudced my foreign friend to them and we are often hang out together.
After eventually they were interested in English as well study.
Thanks to my children im able to enhance my working experience and i could find happnise of my life.
Since when i became a help person to someone i realized that its always a my pleasure.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
Thanks for being so thoughtful in sending this letter to your dear tutor^^. Glad to hear that you're enjoying your job. Here are the necessary revisions on your sentences. read through them.
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How are you doing my tutor hehe.
>>How is my tutor doing?See you soon.
>>CORRECT! (* This usually comes at the end of the letter)I had worked an an english academy as a teacher.
>>I had worked as an English academy teacher.I taught basic english to prumary school students so it wasen't difficult.
>>I taught basic English to primary school students so it wasn't difficult.Whule i was working i learned about how to have an innocent way of thinking.
>>While I was working I learned about how to have an innocent way of thinking.Nevertheless l had to ought to teach children who are not intersted in english.
>>Nevertheless l ought to teach children who are not interested in English.I really understand what their feeling because i did when i was young.
>>I really understand what they're feeling because I did feel the same when I was young.So i tried to teach like that introudced my foreign friend to them and we are often hang out together.
>>So I tried to teach and I also introduced my foreign friend to them and we often hang out together.After eventually they were interested in English as well study.
>>After that, they eventually became interested in English as well as in studying.Thanks to my children im able to enhance my working experience and i could find happnise of my life.
>>Thanks to my children I'm able to enhance my working experience and I could find happiness in my life.Since when i became a help person to someone i realized that its always a my pleasure.
>>Since I became a person who helps someone, I realized that it's always my pleasure.
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