Dear.Vaness

2011-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi my teacher How are you today :) I askde professor about English speech. He told me that "you should speak more than 3minutes miximum. Actually 5mitues will be okay" So once I'd like to show my Topic Vaness. There are 2 stories about major and work experience. See you soon Have a nice day ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Dear, Thank you for making a composition. I am doing fine thank you for asking. See you later! T.Vaness Here are your corrections: Hi my teacher How are you today :) >>Hi my Teacher! How are you today? I askde professor about English speech. >>I asked my Professor about my English speech.He told me that "you should speak more than 3minutes miximum. Actually 5mitues will be okay" >>He told me that I should speak for more than 3 minutes maximum. He actually told me that 5 minutes will be okay.So once I'd like to show my Topic Vaness. >>So, I'd like to show you my topic.There are 2 stories about major and work experience.>>It's composed of two stories. One is about my major and the other one is about work experience. See you soon Have a nice day ^^ >>See you soon. Have a nice day!

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