dear Verna

Last weekend, I was a little bit busy. You know, I visitied my parent's place with my hus on saturday and invited my brother in law to eat dduk-guk with us on sunday. My hus is suffering for stomach pain which makes me to prepare special food everyday. Have you ever heard of "jook" which is one of the korean food? It is very soft rice soup and very good for patients. I'm afraid of loosing time for housekeeping. Isn't it loosing time? Yes, it's not wasting time but consuming my time which has its limit. :)

Hi! Good day to you! Thank you for sending me a composition.  Here are some of the corrections you could review. Take care!  Teacher Verna **    Last weekend, I was a little bit busy. >> Correct You know, I visitied my parent's place with my hus on saturday and invited my brother in law to eat dduk-guk with us on sunday. >> As you know, my husband and I visited my parent’s place last Saturday and we invited my brother-in-law to eat Dduk-guk with us on Sunday.My hus is suffering for stomach pain which makes me to prepare special food everyday. >> My husband is suffering from stomach ache so I prepare a special food for him everyday. Have you ever heard of "jook" which is one of the korean food? >> Have you ever heard of the Korean food called “Jook”? It is very soft rice soup and very good for patients. >> It is a very soft rice soup which is good for people who are sick.I'm afraid of loosing time for housekeeping. >> I’m afraid I am loosing time for housekeeping. Isn't it loosing time? >> Isn’t it taking up too much time? Yes, it's not wasting time but consuming my time which has its limit. :) >> Yes, it isn’t wasting time but it is time consuming and I have a limited time.