dear Verna

2011-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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hi. I'm finishing my book now, which makes me so tired. Anyhow, what I wanted to talk to you this morning was that Jim Parson starred as Sheldon won the best actor. He just looks like an genuine GEEK which is not so unfamiliar for me because I know some friends who are so similar to Sheldon at SNU and PSU (US). When I saw Bigbang theory for the first time, I was a little embarrassed to realized that people laugh (even have fun) when they see those kind of people. This situation is itself funny to me. :)

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Hello! Good job in writing this composition! It is quite funny to watch these geeks on television and in real life. They are truly a different and special kind of people. These are my corrections: Verna hi. I'm finishing my book now, which makes me so tired. >>Hi! I’m finishing my book now which made me so tired.Anyhow, what I wanted to talk to you this morning was that Jim Parson starred as Sheldon won the best actor. >>Anyhow, what I wanted to talk to you about this morning that Jim Parson who plays Sheldon won the best actor award. He just looks like an genuine GEEK which is not so unfamiliar for me because I know some friends who are so similar to Sheldon at SNU and PSU (US). >> He just looks like an genuine GEEK which is not so unfamiliar to me because I know some friends who are so similar to Sheldon at SNU and PSU (US).When I saw Bigbang theory for the first time, I was a little embarrassed to realized that people laugh (even have fun) when they see those kind of people. >> When I saw Bigbang theory for the first time, I was a little embarrassed because I realized that people laugh (even have fun) when they see those kinds of people. This situation is itself funny to me. :) >>Correct OR>>This circumstance is funny for me.

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