dear verna

2011-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I've got a cold suddenly. It's so curious when or where I got it, because I felt quite good until this afternoon. After having dinner, my condition became worse so rapidly. But don't worry, I'm gonna get well soon. :)

강사 첨삭

Hello Mi Jung,

Oh, Please get well soon and rest well tonight.

Sleep well and see you tomorrow.

Teacher Verna

I've got a cold suddenly. It's so curious when or where I got it, because I felt quite good until this afternoon.

>> I caught a cold suddenly, I'm so curious when or where did I get it because I felt quite good until this afternoon.

After having dinner, my condition became worse so rapidly.

>> Correct

>> After dinner, my health condition became bad rapidly.

But don't worry, I'm gonna get well soon. :)

>> Correct

>> Don't worry, I'll get well soon. 

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