dear verna
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I leave my message for you in case you're worrying about me. First of all, my phone seems to have some problem which I found out this morning. Secondly, I MADE IT, that is, I have submitted the material before the deadline. However.............
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for the sweet gesture of sending a message to inform me of what happened to you.
Congratulations on your achievement. I wish that by April there would be good news. You will be in my prayers for sure! See you tomorrow!
-Verna-
I leave my message for you in case you're worrying about me.
>>I left a message for you in case you are worrying about me.
First of all, my phone seems to have some problem which I found out this morning.
>>Correct
Secondly, I MADE IT, that is, I have submitted the material before the deadline. However.............
>> Secondly, I MADE IT; I have submitted the material before the deadline. However.............
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