dear Verna
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However, the original plan was changed not by myself, but by (actually) the president of the university that I was contacting.
>> However, the original plan was changed but by the president of the university that I was contacting.
All of the people were disappointed including the chief who'd like to hire me so acutely.
>> All of the people were disappointed including the chief who'd like to hire me so eagerly.
Anyhow, after changing the plan, I did made it to get the fund and proceed to another research project.
>> Anyhow, after changing the plan, I did make it to get the fund and proceed to another research project.
The final result will be informed after April.
>>Correct
Pls. pray for me one more time to get the fund.
>>Correct
Thanks a lot, always. Love you. :)
>>Correct (Love you too ^^)
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