\"Death is not a period, but a comma, in the story of life.
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강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]-Li!
Thank you for finding the time to answer our essay question even if your schedule is always busy.
I wish reincarnation is real too.
It would be really great if everyone is given a second chance at life.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you later in class. ^^
~Charry
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes, I hope that we can born again later (after die)
>> Sometimes, I hope that we can be born again later after we die.
In this world, I can\\\'t define a good person or a bad person, but good and evil certainly exist.
>> In this world, I can\'t define a good person or a bad person, but good and evil certainly exist.
I believe that if I live as a good person and do something kind and good for other people and animals even my self, after I dead, I can be born in a better environment with great parents.
>> I believe that if I live as a good person and do something kind and good for other people, animals and even for my self, I can be reborn in a better environment with great parents.
I think we should believe that I mentioned.
>> I think people should believe what I have mentioned.
because, people will do better if they believe that they could be born a better in the future, they want to do good behavior and trying to be good person.
>> It\'s because people will do better if they believe that they could be reborn with a better future. They would want to show good behavior and try to be a good person.
there are some people who are very sad and depress, because of the disease, poverty,war even not their fault.
>> There are some people who are very sad and depressed because of a disease, poverty, war and even with things that are not their fault.
but if they aren\\\'t believe Karma, They just live dark life and it\\\'s just one chance live forever.
>> But if they don\'t believe in Karma, they would just live a dark life with a belief that they only live once.
that\\\'s unfair and very poor .. so I want they can live more happy and good life a next life.
>> That\'s unfair and very sad. So, I want them to live a happier and better life in their next life.
if that could be possible.^^
>> I hope that could be possible. ^^
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