Debate
학생이 쓴 원문
Yestarday, I went to rnglish academy and had a debate. It was really excited however, I thinked that our team was bad. First of all, our team was only five person and other were 6 .on oposite team. Also at our team there was two speaker because we was doing public forum debate however, me and another speaker that was speaking was not preparing. So we lose for many scores. However, it was fun because the topic was atomic bomb and I loved the topic because it is issue in nowaday. It was fun debate.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jude! It is nice to know that you participate in an English debate. I guess it is not so important if you win or lose, what is important is that you are having fun. Always do your best. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then. Have a good one!~ T. Lyn
Yestarday, I went to rnglish academy and had a debate.
>>Yesterday, I went to an English academy and had a debate.
It was really excited however, I thinked that our team was bad.
>>it was really exciting, but I felt like my team wasn\'t very good.
First of all, our team was only five person and other were 6 .on oposite team.
>>First of all, our team only had five people and the opposing team had six people.
Also at our team there was two speaker because we was doing public forum debate however, me and another speaker that was speaking was not preparing.
>>Also, there were two presenters on my team because we were holding an open debate, but the other presenter in my didn\'t prepare.
So we lose for many scores.
>>So, we lost a lot of points.
However, it was fun because the topic was atomic bomb and I loved the topic because it is issue in nowaday.
>>But it was interesting because the topic was about the atomic bomb and I loved it because it was a hot topic these days.
It was fun debate.
>>It was a fun deabate.
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