Dec.01.2011.

2011-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Teacher Tiny. It's already thursday and It's first on December. What are you going to do on the weekend? I think you have to go to The church that's why you're christian. I hope you make a new boyfriend.orGet married to me?? kiki. Just joke. We talked about social network service yesterday. You told me You like making friends who is most of foreigners. And I reviewed yesterday class. Could you tell me about your private account? suddenly I wonder. as far as i've felt about you,You're an active person. Anyway see you soon. What did you do yesterday? Well, I watched CNN News in computer because I want to have a good listening skilling. But i have been listening to it for a month ago.I can't definitely evaluate that I'm improving about it. However I'm trying and believe in myself way. And I watched soap opera that title is Root Deep Wood. I think that drama is the most popular in Korea Nowadays. I don't get obsessed something but i sink into that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Your questions are funny specially your idea about me having a new boyfriend. -Tiny^0^ Hi Teacher Tiny.>>CORRECTIt\'s already thursday and It\'s first on December. >> It\'s already Thursday and it\'s the first day of December. What are you going to do on the weekend? >>CORRECTI think you have to go to The church that\'s why you\'re christian. >>CORRECTI hope you make a new boyfriend.orGet married to me?? kiki. >> I hope you make a new boyfriend or get married to me?? kiki. Just joke. >>It\'s just a joke.We talked about social network service yesterday. >>CORRECTYou told me You like making friends who is most of foreigners.>> You told me you like making friends who are mostly foreigners.And I reviewed yesterday class.>> And I reviewed yesterday\'s class.Could you tell me about your private account? >>CORRECTsuddenly I wonder. >>CORRECT >>Suddenly I wonder. as far as i\'ve felt about you,You\'re an active person. >>CORRECT >> As far as I\'ve felt about you, you\'re an active person. Anyway see you soon.>>CORRECTWhat did you do yesterday? >>CORRECTWell, I watched CNN News in computer because I want to have a good listening skilling. >> Well, I watched CNN News on computer because I want to have a good listening skills. But i have been listening to it for a month ago. >> But i have been listening to it for a month. >> But i have been listening to it since a month ago. I can\'t definitely evaluate that I\'m improving about it. >> I can\'t definitely evaluate that I\'m improving about it. However I\'m trying and believe in myself way.>> However I\'m trying to believe in my own way.And I watched soap opera that title is Root Deep Wood. >> And I watched a soap opera titled Root Deep Wood. I think that drama is the most popular in Korea Nowadays. >>CORRECTI don\'t get obsessed something but i sink into that. >> I don\'t get obsessed on something but I sink into that.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·