Dec.01.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Tiny.
It's already thursday and It's first on December.
What are you going to do on the weekend?
I think you have to go to The church that's why you're christian.
I hope you make a new boyfriend.orGet married to me?? kiki.
Just joke.
We talked about social network service yesterday.
You told me You like making friends who is most of foreigners.
And I reviewed yesterday class.
Could you tell me about your private account?
suddenly I wonder.
as far as i've felt about you,You're an active person.
Anyway see you soon.
What did you do yesterday?
Well, I watched CNN News in computer because I want to have a good listening skilling.
But i have been listening to it for a month ago.I can't definitely evaluate that I'm improving about it.
However I'm trying and believe in myself way.
And I watched soap opera that title is Root Deep Wood.
I think that drama is the most popular in Korea Nowadays.
I don't get obsessed something but i sink into that.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Your questions are funny specially your idea about me having a new boyfriend.
-Tiny^0^
Hi Teacher Tiny.>>CORRECTIt\'s already thursday and It\'s first on December.
>> It\'s already Thursday and it\'s the first day of December.
What are you going to do on the weekend?
>>CORRECTI think you have to go to The church that\'s why you\'re christian.
>>CORRECTI hope you make a new boyfriend.orGet married to me?? kiki.
>> I hope you make a new boyfriend or get married to me?? kiki.
Just joke.
>>It\'s just a joke.We talked about social network service yesterday.
>>CORRECTYou told me You like making friends who is most of foreigners.>> You told me you like making friends who are mostly foreigners.And I reviewed yesterday class.>> And I reviewed yesterday\'s class.Could you tell me about your private account?
>>CORRECTsuddenly I wonder.
>>CORRECT
>>Suddenly I wonder.
as far as i\'ve felt about you,You\'re an active person.
>>CORRECT
>> As far as I\'ve felt about you, you\'re an active person.
Anyway see you soon.>>CORRECTWhat did you do yesterday?
>>CORRECTWell, I watched CNN News in computer because I want to have a good listening skilling.
>> Well, I watched CNN News on computer because I want to have a good listening skills.
But i have been listening to it for a month ago.
>> But i have been listening to it for a month.
>> But i have been listening to it since a month ago.
I can\'t definitely evaluate that I\'m improving about it.
>> I can\'t definitely evaluate that I\'m improving about it.
However I\'m trying and believe in myself way.>> However I\'m trying to believe in my own way.And I watched soap opera that title is Root Deep Wood.
>> And I watched a soap opera titled Root Deep Wood.
I think that drama is the most popular in Korea Nowadays.
>>CORRECTI don\'t get obsessed something but i sink into that.
>> I don\'t get obsessed on something but I sink into that.
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