DEC 03

Good morning Sir [이름]~! ^^ I guess you\'ll be busy today~! Enjoy your time and see you in class tomorrow! ^^

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

My parents live far from my apartment.

>>>CORRECT
so I can\'t visit my parents often.

>>> That\' why I can\'t visit my parents often.
Anyway, my wife dosen\'t like visiting my parents often.
>>> Anyway, my wife doesn\'t like visiting my parents often.
My parents made \"kimjang\" in thier house with their neighbors in early November.

>>> My parents made \"kimjang\" in their house with their neighbors in early November.

So I wanted to go there to help them make kimjang. but I coudn\'t, I had a prior plan with my coworker.
>>> So I wanted to go there to help them make kimjang but I couldn\'t. I had a prior plan with my coworker.
If I have a chance, I start own my business in the same field to make a lot of money in the future.
>>>If I have a chance, I will start my own business in the same field to make a lot of money in the future.
The doctor who is my customer wants me to come to the hospital early and to be waiting until he start the procedure because the procedure schedule is usually changed frequently.

>>>The doctor who is my customer wants me to come to the hospital early and wait until he starts the procedure because the procedure schedule usually changes frequently.