Dec.07.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.Teacher.
It's first writing for you in english.
Nowadays,i told you before.
I go to conversation school to speak english with other people who are older than me unfortunately.
but It's hard to speak english nevertheless I enjoy talking with someone.
It's already winter in Korea.in spite of winter,It's not cold these days.
i guess We have in troblem about climate change in all over the world.
Anyway,This question is from my freetalking class.
What are you going to do tomorrow?
Well.I going to watch some tv programs and read some books.
I think Nowadays, i'm interesting into english.
so I enjoy speaking english books these days.
I thought when i was in young.
I was good at exercise.so I learned is some martial arts which made me excitied.
I was achieved some prizes about them.
I knew at that time.I have to learn them more than other subjects.
as far as I've experienced,All exercises at school was addict to me.
but I don't enjoy ball games,such as basket ball etc.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sharing so much about your day and experiences.
Have a nice day!
-T.Karen -
Hi.Teacher.
>> Hi Teacher!It\'s first writing for you in english.
>> It\'s my first time to write to you in english.
Nowadays,i told you before. I go to conversation school to speak english with other people who are older than me unfortunately.
>> I told you before that nowadays I go to conversation school to speak English with other people who are older than me, unfortunately.
but It\'s hard to speak english nevertheless I enjoy talking with someone.
>> It\'s hard to speak English. Nevertheless, I enjoy talking with someone.
It\'s already winter in Korea.
>>CORRECT
in spite of winter,It\'s not cold these days.
>>CORRECT
>> Inspite of winter, it\'s not cold these days.
i guess We have in troblem about climate change in all over the world.
>> I guess we have a problem about climate change all over the world.
Anyway,This question is from my freetalking class.
>>CORRECTWhat are you going to do tomorrow?
>>CORRECTWell.I going to watch some tv programs and read some books.
>> Well, I\'m going to watch some tv programs and read some books.
I think Nowadays, i\'m interesting into english.
>> I think nowadays, I\'m interested into english.
so I enjoy speaking english books these days.
>> So I enjoy reading English books these days.
I thought when i was in young. I was good at exercise.so I learned is some martial arts which made me excitied.
>> I thought when I was young, I was good at exercise so I learned some martial arts which made me excitied.
I was achieved some prizes about them.
>> I achieved some prizes.
I knew at that time.I have to learn them more than other subjects.
>> CORRECT
>> I knew at that time, I have to learn them more than other subjects.
as far as I\'ve experienced,All exercises at school was addict to me.
>> As far as I\'ve experienced, all exercises at school was addictive to me.
but I don\'t enjoy ball games,such as basket ball etc.
>>CORRECT
>> But I don\'t enjoy ball games, such as basket ball etc.
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