Dec.07.2011.
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think of this class.
Many Koreans don't know how to study english which made us a little mad.
We need to be basic to study english. Nevertheless,we study high level of TOEIC or TOEFL or watching CNN News.
so We feel that it's so hard to study english or Make sure we target some goal to raise achievements.
after that,We don't have any speaking english or Not much of english level.
I'm pretty sure I can obviously say about this theme to Koreans.
We are wrong how to study english.
Nowadays,I think these topic that i don't know why i'm thinking of them.
but We're always trying to think or to be criticism.
My teacher at the conversation academy said to me.
My condition about English level is not beginner and not high level at the moment.
I think i have intermediate level.
I heard from him that you're lacking basics for speaking.
so nowdays,I'm reading basic english to speak fluenyly.
I know I must not expect too much at your first attempt.
That's all.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You have a very strong opinion about how to study English properly.
I hope this idea and your conversation teacher will help you learn the basics which I would agree to be very important.
-Tiny^0^
What do you think of this class.
>>CORRECT
>> What do you think of this class?
Many Koreans don\'t know how to study english which made us a little mad.
>>CORRECT
>> Many Koreans don\'t know how to study English which made us a little mad.
We need to be basic to study english.
>> We need to study the basics of English.
Nevertheless, we study high level of TOEIC or TOEFL or watching CNN News.
>>CORRECTso We feel that it\'s so hard to study english or Make sure we target some goal to raise achievements.
>>CORRECT
>> So we feel that it\'s so hard to study English or make sure we target some goal to raise achievements.
after that,We don\'t have any speaking english or Not much of english level.
>> After that, we don\'t have any good skills in speaking English or not much of English level.
I\'m pretty sure I can obviously say about this theme to Koreans.>>CORRECT
We are wrong how to study english.
>>CORRECT
>> We are wrong how to study English.
Nowadays,I think these topic that i don\'t know why i\'m thinking of them.
>> Nowadays, I think about this topic that I don\'t know why i\'m thinking of them.
but We\'re always trying to think or to be criticism.
>> But we\'re always trying to think or to be critics.
My teacher at the conversation academy said to me. My condition about English level is not beginner and not high level at the moment.
>> My teacher at the conversation academy said to me that my English level is not a beginner and not high level at the moment.
I think i have intermediate level.
>>CORRECT
>> I think I have intermediate level.
I heard from him that you\'re lacking basics for speaking.
>> I heard from him that I'm lacking basics in speaking.
so nowdays,I\'m reading basic english to speak fluenyly.
>>So nowadays, I\'m reading basic English to speak fluently.
I know I must not expect too much at your first attempt.
>>He said, 'I know I must not expect too much at your first attempt.'
That\'s all.
>>CORRECT
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