Dec. 08.2011.

Hi T-Karan. It's already Thursday. Thank you for your efforts that you changed this class course. Last night i was surpirsed that i heard from you about your age. But you don't care about my opinion's way that if you got something concerced. Anyway,i keep forgetting it's December. Maybe i'm bumming nowadays. I like the december that's why i can watch some tv programs something special on tv. but These days,we can watch many famous programs on the internet. you feel them. On the other side,it's sad to me that we hold alot of parties during December. Make sure my friends will call me that what do you do nowadays? or What are you doing? They'll say to me, Come on, Let's have parties and they'll tease me like childish. Hey,I promoted captain in military. what do you do first lieutenant? I know that it's just a joke to me. They always cocerned about me. That's all. In a recent Korean, that's exactly what happnens. They ask someone who is public officer.

Hi Mr. [이름]! Thanks for sending in your composition. You are right, its Thursday. And time really does fly so fast. It's always my pleasure to help you with any problems that you may be having. So if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask. (~__~). I like learning more about you so please keep sending in your compositions. I'll talk to you again later during class. (^_^)

 

Hi T-Karan.

>> Hi Teacher Karen.

 It\'s already Thursday.

>>Correct!

 Thank you for your efforts that you changed this class course.

>>Correct!

 Last night i was surpirsed that i heard from you about your age.

>>Please remember to always capitalize the word 'I'.

>>Last night I was surprised when I heard about your age.

 But you don\'t care about my opinion\'s way that if you got something concerced.

>>But you shouldn't care about my opinion if it will make you concerned.

 Anyway,i keep forgetting it\'s December.

>>Correct grammar!

>>Anyway, I keep forgetting is't December.

 Maybe i\'m bumming nowadays.

>>Maybe I'm just bummed nowadays.

 I like the december that\'s why i can watch some tv programs something special on tv.

>> I like December because I can watch some special TV programs.

 but These days,we can watch many famous programs on the internet.

 you feel them.

>>Capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence.

>>But these days, we can watch many famous programs on the internet.

 On the other side,it\'s sad to me that we hold alot of parties during December.

>>On the other hand, for me, it's sad that we have to hold a lot of parties during December.

 Make sure my friends will call me that what do you do nowadays? or What are you doing?

>>My friends always call me to ask me what I do nowadays, like 'What are you doing?'

 They\'ll say to me, Come on, Let\'s have parties and they\'ll tease me like childish.

>>They'll say to me, 'Come on, let's have a party!' and they'll tease me, they are childish.

 Hey,I promoted captain in military.

>>Hey, I was promoted as captain in the military.

what do you do first lieutenant?

>>How do you do first lieutenant?

 I know that it\'s just a joke to me.

>>To me, its's just a joke.

 They always cocerned about me.

>>They are always concerned about me.

 That\'s all.

>>Correct!

 In a recent Korean, that\'s exactly what happnens.

>>Recently, that's what happens in Korea.

 They ask someone who is public officer.

>>Correct!