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What did you do on your weekend? I saw two movies on my computer that titled Rounder and I am [Name]. Maybe you know these movies that it's famous movies all over the world. I felt so impressive about I am sam. The movie said that parents have to had a constant way to access for children. But it's not easy to keep it. I know that to grow children is hard to to be all right However All parents wish way to success to their kids. Nevertheless we can't avoid our kids wnadering and we can't control all over the places. We don't get obessed for our kids and to try these things to get over. But i can't understand my parent's mind in detail. I'm sure we have to try more each other that these opinion is not easy to solve for living which'll make us more healthy than other things. Anyway,I hope Have a great night since today. Do you think you can trust someone once they cheated on you? I didn't see her that's why i'm GyeongSangDo person who don't enjoy lying. Fortunately,

Thank you for your composition. You did a great job. Keep up the good work! :)   Here are my corrections:   What did you do on your weekend? >>Correct!I saw two movies on my computer that titled Rounder and I am [Name]. >> I saw two movies on my computer entittled Rounder and I am [Name].Maybe you know these movies that it\'s famous movies all over the world. >> Maybe you know these movies because they are famous all over the world.I felt so impressive about I am sam. >> I felt impressed on the movie I am [Name].The movie said that parents have to had a constant way to access for children. >> The movie said that parents needs to have constant way in dealing with their children.But it\'s not easy to keep it. >> Correct! know that to grow children is hard to to be all right However All parents wish way to success to their kids. >> I know that growing up children is very hard, however all parents wishes their children their success.Nevertheless we can\'t avoid our kids wnadering and we can\'t control all over the places. >> Nvertheless, we can\'t avoid our kids to wonder and we can\'t control them.We don\'t get obessed for our kids and to try these things to get over. >> We need not to be obsessed to our kids and try to do things to get over.But i can\'t understand my parent\'s mind in detail. >> Correct! Please capitalize the word I.I\'m sure we have to try more each other that these opinion is not easy to solve for living which\'ll make us more healthy than other things. >> Im sure we have to try to talk abput these opinions to each other to have a healthy relationship.Anyway,I hope Have a great night since today. >> Anyway, I hope you\'ll have a great night from today.Do you think you can trust someone once they cheated on you? >> Correct!I didn\'t see her that\'s why i\'m GyeongSangDo person who don\'t enjoy lying. >> Correct!Fortunately,