Dec.13.

2011-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm not womanizer,but i don't like GyeongSangDo women that's why They're urgent or selfish. it's that as far as i've experienced the women which made me mad. So i wanna see just kind and not be beautiful girl who know their beauty themslves. How do you turn someone down when you are asked out? Well.My heyday is sophomore when i was in college. I said to you before. I was in charge of a present club in college. We joined other college that at the time, I had to do something special that's why i was leader. I met other leader and talked about going to other place. After meeting, Two girls got my cell phone number. I remembered vividly that one girl's major was music composition and the other girl was english. At that time.I liked girl who wore glasses. I didn't know but i chose english girl that's why she wore glasses. I'm sorry for you that this question is turn someone down. I didn't express something special that's why i was leader.

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