Dec.13.

2011-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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If i expressed something worried, she didn't participate in our meeting. I just answered and call for meeting, and it's the most important things that we have to tell my girl friend which make me comfortable. Who do you wish you could date? Well.I don't think so usually that's why it's not happening. So to speak,I liked girl's generation who one of members is seo hyun that's why my mother second name is seo. I don't like beautiful girl because I 'm not looking good and i don't have any job that i can't be responsible to support someone,and i'm not womanizing. You know if you served in military, many executive want to be womanizing. I can't understand them who spend alot of money in there. I know that they have a safe job in Korea that i can care of them. But it's not good situations nevertheless i can't express something special to them. If i have high level. Anyway it's already middle of December.Take care and I hope you have good parties in your country.

강사 첨삭

Hello there:) This is the continuation of my corrections. Thank you again for sharing this composition with me. Have a nice day:)   If i expressed something worried, she didn\'t participate in our meeting.>>If I expressed that I am worried about something, she won\'t participate in our meeting.I just answered and call for meeting, and it\'s the most important things that we have to tell my girl friend which make me comfortable.>>I just answered the call and asked if we can meet. It is the most important thing to do for a girl which made me comfortable as well.Who do you wish you could date? >>CORRECTWell.I don\'t think so usually that\'s why it\'s not happening. >>Well, I don\'t usually think about that.So to speak,I liked girl\'s generation who one of members is seo hyun that\'s why my mother second name is seo. >>So to speak,I like one of the Girl\'s Generation  members, Seo Hyun .That\'s the reason why my mother\'s second name is Seo.I don\'t like beautiful girl because I \'m not looking good and i don\'t have any job that i can\'t be responsible to support someone,and i\'m not womanizing.>>I don\'t like beautiful girls because I \'m not good looking and I don\'t have any job. I can\'t be responsible to support someone,and I\'m not a womanizer.You know if you served in military, many executive want to be womanizing. >>You know if you served in the military, many executives want to womanize.I can\'t understand them who spend alot of money in there. >>I can\'t understand why they spend a lot of money with that.I know that they have a safe job in Korea that i can care of them. >>I know that they have a stable job in Korea and I should not worry about that.But it\'s not good situations nevertheless i can\'t express something special to them. >>But it\'s not a good situation. Nevertheless, I can\'t express my insights to them.Anyway it\'s already middle of December.Take care and I hope you have good parties in your country. >>Anyway it\'s already the middle of December.Take care and I hope you will have good parties in your country.

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