Dec.22.

When was the last time you went on vacation. I can't remember that. I said to you guys yesterday. I don't enjoy traveling that's why i feel like it bothers me and i'm out of lazy go on a trip. Maybe when i was in military, I had experienced alot of open air which was slelpt at that time. You know Korea military system is bad. But i heard from media after i finished in military. Female ROTC. that's also combat arms. You know that in military there, don't exsit good women. If they would drill,They must make up of their tent and gear up for female restroom. It's not easy to gear up for female facilities. Do you ever go on a trip alone? No.I've never,but i know about alone, lonely. When i was in college,I enjoyed reading philosopy. I can't remember the book and story line but that book said. You must enjoy alone.That mean is that many people don't know along and lonely. in short,We always depend on other people or family.

Hello [이름]! Thank you for spending some of your time making a wonderful composition. I  really appreciate it. ^^, I hope that you will continue to write something in your composition board. By the way, I made some modifications in your letter. Please read and study the following: When was the last time you went on vacation.>> When was the last time you went on vacation? (Punctuation mark)I can\'t remember that. >> I can\'t remember it anymore. (Sentence Construction)I said to you guys yesterday. I don\'t enjoy traveling that\'s why i feel like it bothers me and i\'m out of lazy go on a trip. >> I have told you yesterday that I don\'t enjoy travelling because it bothers me and I feel lazy to go on trips. (Verb tenses, Conjunctions, Sentence Construction)Maybe when i was in military, I had experienced alot of open air which was slelpt at that time.>> When I was in the military service, I had alot of experiences sleeping in open field. (Sentence Construction)You know Korea military system is bad.>> You know, Korean military system is bad. (Punctuation mark)But i heard from media after i finished in military. Female ROTC. that\'s also combat arms.>> I heard from the media after I finished my training in the military service that female ROTC also has combat arms. (Sentence Construction) You know that in military there, don\'t exsit good women.>> Good looking women don\'t exist on that military group. (Sentence Construction) If they would drill,They must make up of their tent and gear up for female restroom. >> On their drills, they make their own tents and female restrooms. (Sentence Construction) It\'s not easy to gear up for female facilities.>> Correct! :) Very good! Do you ever go on a trip alone?>> Correct! :) Nice! No.I\'ve never,but i know about alone, lonely. >> No, I have not experienced that. But I know that it is lonely to be alone.  (Sentence Construction) When i was in college,I enjoyed reading philosopy. >> When I was in college, I enjoyed reading philosopy books. (Capitalization, Word Choice)I can\'t remember the book and story line but that book said. You must enjoy alone. >> I can\'t remember the book title and story line but it says, \"You must enjoy being alone\". (Sentence Construction) That mean is that many people don\'t know along and lonely. >> It means that many people don\'t want to be alone and lonely. Sentence Construction) in short,We always depend on other people or family. >> They always depend on others or on their families. Sentence Construction)