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2011-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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After reading that book. I was changed alot of thing.such as i went to restaurant alone so i felt like it's free and i have open minds to think of something. But nowadays I wanna talk about small things with someone. That's why i'm a people person. What are you enjoy doing the most? You know I enjoy jogging and reading books. and i like talking about small things with my girlfriend. Everyday i'm looking forward to seeing her. What is the best vacation souvenir that you have ever bought? When i was in military, i often bought ginseng for my parents each time i went home. I know that ginseng was dirt cheap to my parents. It cost about thrity dollar but i can remember that my parents was happy at that time. They knew that souvenir was not expensive to them. If i were them in their shoes,I must be happy. Where would you like to go on vacation next time? I don't decide yet where to go. so to speak,I hope to go to JeongDongJin with my girlfriend.

강사 첨삭

Hi!!! Thank you for your composition. Keep it up!! Have a wonderful day! :) __T.Karen__   After reading that book. >> Correct!I was changed alot of thing. >> I was inspired to change a lot of things. such as i went to restaurant alone so i felt like it\'s free and i have open minds to think of something.>> Like, as I went to the restaurant alone I felt like it\'s free and I have time to think. But nowadays I wanna talk about small things with someone. >> But nowadays, I feel like I want to talk to someone about small things.That\'s why i\'m a people person.>> That\'s the reason why I\'m a people person. What are you enjoy doing the most?>> What do you enjoy doing the most? You know I enjoy jogging and reading books. >> For me, I enjoy jogging and reading books.and i like talking about small things with my girlfriend. >> Correct! Please don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence. (And) Everyday i\'m looking forward to seeing her.>> Correct! Please don\'t forget to capitalize the word I. What is the best vacation souvenir that you have ever bought? >> Correct!When i was in military, i often bought ginseng for my parents each time i went home. >> When I was till in the military, I often buy gnseng for my parents everytime I go home.I know that ginseng was dirt cheap to my parents. >> I know that ginseng was cheap for my parents.It cost about thrity dollar but i can remember that my parents was happy at that time.>> It costs about thirty dollar but I can remember how happy my parents was at that time I gave them the ginseng. They knew that souvenir was not expensive to them. >> They know that souvenir should not be that expensive if it\'s for them.If i were them in their shoes,I must be happy.>> If I were in their shoes, I must be happy.Where would you like to go on vacation next time? >> Where would you like to have your vacation next time?I don\'t decide yet where to go. >> For me, I can\'t decide yet where to go.so to speak,I hope to go to JeongDongJin with my girlfriend. >> So to speak, I\'m hoping to go to JeongDongJing with my girlfriend.  

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