Dec.29.

What are you afraid of the most? Nowadays,I'm afraid of my future because i have to get a new job. There's another thing i must keep on running for my health. When i worked in company, i was afraid of people. I'm pretty sure, it's hard to make only a nice friend in company. I know that and first i try and i should have to yield to them. If you were in a bed mood, what would you do to help get out of it? In my free time i enjoy jogging that situation help me self-reflection. Why don't you all enjoy jogging? If i could recommend you,This action is very well for you all. It's free and don't care of time or place. Only it's depends on the weather. What is love? I don't know how to love but i'm pretty sure, we have many kind of love in the world.such as family relationship or love affair or couple love. I think that these love have the same pattern in the world but there are barely different sometimes.for example get obsessed or fill in themselves desire.

Hi!! Thank you for your composition. You did great. Keep it up! :)   Here are my corrections:   What are you afraid of the most? >> Correct!Nowadays,I\'m afraid of my future because i have to get a new job. >> Correct! (please capitalize the word I)There\'s another thing i must keep on running for my health. >> Another thing I\'m afraid of is that I must take good care of my health.When i worked in company, i was afraid of people. >> When I started working in the company, I was afraid of the people in it.I\'m pretty sure, it\'s hard to make only a nice friend in company. >> I know that it is hard to find a nice friend in the company.I know that and first i try and i should have to yield to them. >> I know that and at first I try and should be the one to do it.If you were in a bed mood, what would you do to help get out of it? >> If you are in a bood mood, what do you usually do to get out of it?In my free time i enjoy jogging that situation help me self-reflection. >> During my free time I enjoy jogging that helps me on my self reflection.Why don\'t you all enjoy jogging? >> Correct!If i could recommend you,This action is very well for you all. >> I recommend that jogging is very helpful to all of you.It\'s free and don\'t care of time or place. >> It\'s free and son\'t need that much time or place.Only it\'s depends on the weather. >> But it would alos depend on the weather.What is love? >> Correct!I don\'t know how to love but i\'m pretty sure, we have many kind of love in the world. such as family relationship or love affair or couple love. >> i don\'t know what love is but I\'m pretty sure that we have many kinds of love in world such as family or couple kind of love.I think that these love have the same pattern in the world but there are barely different sometimes. >> i think that these kinds of love have the same pattern in the worls but still they have some differences sometimes. for example get obsessed or fill in themselves desire. >> For example, being obsessed or desire.