Dec.29

I wanna find a nice girl who would be like a kind person. I know that, it's not easy find a nice girl in Korea. most of people who wanna be greedy, rich and a high salary job but I'm not interested in that issue. How have you been feeling today? I don't know what to feel today. I just saw a girl who is a conversation academy friend. We started to study free-talking about a week ago. We have the same as age. her major was japanese and statistics and her japanese skill is reasonable and she had stayed in Canada for 2 years when she was a sophomore in college. I think i'm not enough to listen to other people's speaking while talking. Anyway,i feel like being sick of English. I know that,I say for myself. "You must not expect too much at your first attempt.and "Birds of feather flock together" Nowadays i relfect on what i have done alot of things not long ago. People around me who say to me. It's just " slump" i recognize them. But it's not easy to imprevoe.

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for writing a wonderful composition. I  really appreciate it. ^^, I just hope that next time, you will write about one topic only for every composition that you will make. The reason is to entirely focus the discussion on a specific subject and not to be distracted with other ideas.   By the way, I made some modifications in your essay. Please read and study the following: I wanna find a nice girl who would be like a kind person. >> I want to find a nice and kind girl. (Sentence Construction)I know that, it\'s not easy find a nice girl in Korea.>> I know that it\'s not easy to find that kind of girl here in Korea. (Sentence Construction) most of people who wanna be greedy, rich and a high salary job but I\'m not interested in that issue. >> Most of the people are greedy. They want to be rich and have a high paying salary  job, though I\'m not interested on that issue. (Sentence Construction, Punctuation mark, Capitalization) How have you been feeling today?>> Correct! :) I don\'t know what to feel today. >> Correct! :) I just saw a girl who is a conversation academy friend. >> I just saw a girl who\'s my friend in conversation academy. (Sentence Construction) We started to study free-talking about a week ago.>> Correct! :) We have the same as age.>> We have the same age. (Word omission) OR YOU CAN SAY >> We are on the same age. her major was japanese and statistics and her japanese skill is reasonable and she had stayed in Canada for 2 years when she was a sophomore in college.>> Her major is Japanese and Statistics and her Japanese skill is reasonable. She had stayed in Canada for 2 years when she was a sophomore student in college. (Sentence Construction, Punctuation mark, Capitalization) I think i\'m not enough to listen to other people\'s speaking while talking.>> I think I\'m not really good in listening to other people\'s stories/ statements. (Sentence Construction) Anyway,i feel like being sick of English.>> I feel like being sick of the English communication skills. (Sentence Construction, Capitalization) I know that,I say for myself. \"You must not expect too much at your first attempt.and \"Birds of feather flock together\">> I know that I should tell myself these things: \"You must not expect too much in your first attempt.\" and,  \"Birds of the same feather, flock together.\" Nowadays i relfect on what i have done alot of things not long ago.>> Nowadays, I reflect on the things that I have done in the past. (Sentence Construction, Capitalization) People around me who say to me. It\'s just \" slump\" i recognize them.>> I can remember people who are close to me saying \"slump\". (Sentence Construction) But it\'s not easy to imprevoe. >> But it is not easy to improve right away. (Sentence Construction)