december~~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is the first day of December.
Time is go fast and it makes me so sad.
I didn't know how to handle the rest of days.
But I got the Franklin Planner which is world famous planner made by
Franklin.
The planner is very useful in planning work & study.
So I'll take courage with the planner.^^
Anyway I was tired in this morning but your energetic voice made me
feeling better. thank you~~~!!
uh...I want to speak english well ㅠ.ㅠ
I felt that my speaking skill has plateaued for a while.
I have to do anything good to english.
Go go~!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi J! I feel the same too. Time flies like and arrow and there were still many things that I wasn't able to fulfill. But as they say, LIVE LIFE TO THE FULLEST? Just enjoy each day that passes. Don't worry too much. Cheer up girl!
Lei J
Today is the first day of December.
>>correct
Time is go fast and it makes me so sad.
>>Time flies so fast and it makes me feel sad.
I didn't know how to handle the rest of the days.
>>correct
But I got the Franklin Planner which is a world famous planner made by Franklin.
>>correct
The planner is very useful in planning work & study.
>>correct
So I'll take courage with the planner.^^
>>correct
Anyway I was tired this morning but your energetic voice made me feeling better.
>> Anyway I was tired this morning but your energetic voice made me feel better.
thank you~~~!!
>>correct
uh...I want to speak english well ㅠ.ㅠ
>>correct
I felt that my speaking skill has plateaued for a while.
>>correct
I have to do anything good to english.
>>I need to give my best to have good English skills.
*9.Go go~!!!
>>correct
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