Decide what are the three most important qualities of an ideal parent. Are there any other qualities

Great essay again.

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You are absolutely right. We should always show our children our love.

There might be times that they might misunderstood us, such as working overseas or the way we discipline them.

We should find time to explain to them why.

Of course, in the future, they will understand us.

What a great topic again. Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina

I think that qualities of ideal parents are patience, understanding, and most importantly loving.

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There will no parents who do not love their children, however, expressing their love in more tangible way is of critical importance.

>> There are no parents who do not love their children, however, expressing their love in a more tangible way is of critical importance.

If you do not express, they do not know or feel how much you love them, even if you heart is filled with love toward them.

>> If you do not express, they do not know or feel how much you love them, even if your heart is filled with love towards them.

It is true that many young children are not mature enough to fully understand you if you keep remaining silent.

>> It is true that many young children are not mature enough to fully understand you if you remain silent.  

>> OR: It is true that many young children are not mature enough to fully understand you if you keep silent.

I’ve actually seen many parents who have worked so hard to support their family, but their children turned into bad boys, even in a worst case,

committing crimes because their fathers were not there for them when they desperately needed especially during their adolescence.

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>> OR: I’ve actually seen many parents who have worked so hard to support their family, but their children turned into bad boys, even in a worst case

such as committing crimes. Because their fathers were not there for them when they desperately needed especially during their adolescence.

Loving our children from the bottom of our heart is great, however, if you do not show and share your feelings with your children as much as possible, they will turn their back on you.

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Children need time to grow and it might take long. Be patient.

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