Decribe your favorite movie
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My favorite movie is Okja. It made Bong Jun-ho director
It include about love but seem a bit anmations.
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Hello, Ju Mi! I watched Ojka, too. I did enjoy that movie as well. ^^ Thank you for taking your time answering your homework today. Have a fun day!
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My favorite movie is Okja.
>>CORRECT
It made Bong Jun-ho director
>>It was directed by Bong Jun-ho.
It include about love but seem a bit anmations.
>>It includes themes of love but also has a bit of an animated feel.
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