Definitely Philippines :)
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can move to live another country, I\'ll choose Philippine.
Because first reason why, Elise live in there:) I really wants to see her.
And ususally my mother and I talk about that topic, everytime we picked the Philippine.
We loved to warm weather and tropical fruits.
Living in the Philippines for a month is one of my bucket lists.
it\'s really exited to only imagine.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
You made me smile with your answer. I would love to meet you as well! Tell me when you are going to visit the Philippines in the future. :)
If I can move to live another country, I\'ll choose Philippine.
>> If I can move to another country, I\'ll choose the Philippines.
Because first reason why, Elise live in there:) I really wants to see her.
>> My first reason is that Elise lives there. I really want to see her.
And ususally my mother and I talk about that topic, everytime we picked the Philippine
>> Me and my mother usually think about this topic and we always pick the Philippines.
We loved to warm weather and tropical fruits.
>> We love warm weathers and tropical fruits.
Living in the Philippines for a month is one of my bucket lists.
>> CORRECT
it\'s really exited to only imagine.
>> I get excited by just imagining it.
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