definition of success

2013-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I think success is 'achieve happiness'. All people have their own goal, and I think someone's goal mean he or she's origin of happiness. A person feels sad when they don't success a goal in their life, because they wanted to be happy but they didn't. Thus, I think success is same with happiness.

강사 첨삭

Hi Stella!^^ Thanks for this one. In some ways, you may be right to say that success is the same with happiness. What makes one person happy is reaching their dreams. However, there are times that happy people are not really succesful, while some succesful people are not really happy. What do you think of that? Good night, Stella!^^ ~Teacher Alice I think success is \'achieve happiness\'. >> I think success is \'achieving happiness\'. All people have their own goal, and I think someone\'s goal mean he or she\'s origin of happiness. >> All people have their own goal, and I think someone\'s goal means his or her reason of happiness. A person feels sad when they don\'t success a goal in their life, because they wanted to be happy but they didn\'t. >> A person feels sad when they don\'t succeed in their goal in life. That is because they wanted to be happy but they didn\'t. Thus, I think success is same with happiness. >> Thus, I think success is the same with happiness.

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