Dehydrated food

2026-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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My favorite food to dehydrate is sweet potatoes. I like to dehydrate some vegetables and some fruit such as apples and tangerines. Some fruit is getting sweeter and sweeter when dehydrated. I can enjoy it as a snack. My dog likes dehydrated sweet potatoes best.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Gi [이름]!
I enjoyed discussing this topic with you. I am learning a lot whenever we talk about food, and thank you for that. Just a minor correction: we should use \'gets\' instead of \'getting\' because we are referring to a basic process.
- T. Caitlyn 
My favorite food to dehydrate is sweet potatoes. 
>> CORRECT 
I like to dehydrate some vegetables and some fruit such as apples and tangerines. 
>> CORRECT 
Some fruit is getting sweeter and sweeter when dehydrated. 
>> Some fruits get sweeter and sweeter when dehydrated.
I can enjoy it as a snack. 
>> CORRECT 
My dog likes dehydrated sweet potatoes best.
>> CORRECT 

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