Deifiency
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently the project that I designed have found a few deficiencies.
That's why I couldn't sleep well.
I try to solve the deficiencies through the modification drawing.
I hope Evertthing will be OK
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Daniel! ^-^
Happy Wednesday! Thank you so much for this composition.
I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
I will see you later in class.
_T. Mayleen :)
Recently the project that I designed have found a few deficiencies.
>>> The recent project I was working was found to be lacking in some aspects.
That\'s why I couldn\'t sleep well.
>>> Correct!
I try to solve the deficiencies through the modification drawing.
>>> I tried to resolve it by modifying my design.
I hope Evertthing will be OK
>>> I hope that everything will be okay.
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