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I expected in april the pace of new infection might be go down so the situation would be stable, but i was wrong.
The number of newly confirmed patients is still over a hundred and the government sticks to recommend to avoid mess gathering places such as restaurnts and hotels.
They already suspended schools untill at the end of this week, but they are considering about delay them again.
I can tell there are lots of people insisting students should go back to school now, however this is against with my own opinion.
Teenagers are emotionally fragile and easily tempt by disinformaions. Furthermore they can be affected so easily by each other that they undoubtely got carried away.
So it is quite clear that if a students contracts the virus, others are getting started to blame him and sharing his personnal information using sns. So a student with the virus can be bullied.
This will be a common situation among school. So apart from spreading virus itself, it\'s essential to protect students.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cho. Thank you for this. You\'re right. It\'s important to ensure safety and well-being first.
By the way, what is your Skype ID? I tried searching for [이메일] but it is not appearing. Thank you!
By the way, what is your Skype ID? I tried searching for [이메일] but it is not appearing. Thank you!
- T. Beth
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>>> I expected in April for the pace of new infections to go down so the situation would be stable, but I was wrong.
The number of newly confirmed patients is still over a hundred and the government sticks to recommend to avoid mess gathering places such as restaurnts and hotels.
>>> The number of newly confirmed patients is still over a hundred and the government sticks to recommending avoiding mass gathering places such as restaurants and hotels.
They already suspended schools untill at the end of this week, but they are considering about delay them again.
>>> They already suspended schools until the end of this week, but they are considering delaying them again.
I can tell there are lots of people insisting students should go back to school now, however this is against with my own opinion.
>>> I can tell there are lots of people insisting students should go back to school now. However, this is against with my own opinion.
>>> OR: I can tell there are lots of people insisting students should go back to school now. However, I think otherwise.
Teenagers are emotionally fragile and easily tempt by disinformaions.
>>> Teenagers are emotionally fragile and easily tempted by disinformation.
Furthermore they can be affected so easily by each other that they undoubtely got carried away.
>>> Furthermore, they can be affected so easily by each other that they undoubtedly get carried away.
So it is quite clear that if a students contracts the virus, others are getting started to blame him and sharing his personnal information using sns.
>>> So it is quite clear that if a student contracts the virus, others start to blame him and share his personal information using SNS.
So a student with the virus can be bullied.
>>> correct
This will be a common situation among school.
This will be a common situation among school.
>>> This will be a common situation among schools.
So apart from spreading virus itself, it\'s essential to protect students.
>>> correct
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