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12/20 Korean have a first woman president. She has a historical experiences. Her father was a past president was dead by someone's gunshot. She can outcome many difficult things. Perhaps,she has many close statemen. She should use political circles well. I hope that she can raise to a higher level about Korea. 12/21 In fact,I don't remember about presents. Because I was very young and I was not rich. But our family is happy. Because we love each other. And my best presents are my parents brother my wife and cute daughter.

Hello there! I appreciate your effort in sending over your homework tonight, but i guess we still need to work on your grammar. Please go over my corrections for your improvement. I would be more than glad to discuss this topic in our class. T. Jane^^ Here are my corrections for you: 12/20 Korean have a first woman president >> DID YOU MEAN: This December 20, South Korea has elected the first woman president. (Formal sentence structuring) She has a historical experiences. >> She been in the politics since then. >> OR She has been part of our history since then. Her father was a past president was dead by someone\'s gunshot. >> DID YOU MEAN: Her father was a former president and was assasinated during his time. She can outcome many difficult things. >> She can overcome a lot of difficulties. (Better) Perhaps,she has many close statemen. >> DID YOU MEAN: Perhaps, she can rule the country like her father. She should use political circles well. >> She should also use political strategies well. I hope that she can raise to a higher level about Korea. >> I hope she can improve and can develop orea even more.12/21 In fact,I don\'t remember about presents. >> DID YOU MEAN: This December 21, In fact I don\'t remember anything about current events. (Formal sentence structuring) Because I was very young and I was not rich. >> Because I am very young and i\'m not that rich. But our family is happy. >> Correct Because we love each other. >> Correct And my best presents are my parents brother my wife and cute daughter. >> And the best present I have are my parents, my brother, my wife and my cute daughter.