Delicious Korean food.
학생이 쓴 원문
Each country have tradition food. And Korea also has tradition food. First Korea\'s traditional food is Kimchi. Kimchi is the most popular Korea\'s traditional food. Basic Kimchi is ship Kimchi. It is spicy and little salty. And there are green onion Kimchi, cubed radish kimchi etc. And second is Japchae. Japchae is making with meat, and many vegetable. It is my favorite Korea traditional food. Finally, seaweed soup. Seaweed soup is making with seaweed and meat. In past, people eat seaweed soup when they give birth to a baby. And normal people can\'t eat meat, and they eat seaweed for blood. It is sad story. And there are more Korea tradition food. It is very delicous, and helpful food. Please eat it!
강사 첨삭
Hello, John! I will definitely try these dishes out~ Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Each country have tradition food.
>>Each country has a traditional food.
And Korea also has tradition food.
>>Korea has, too!
First Korea\'s traditional food is Kimchi.
>>First on the list is kimchi.
Kimchi is the most popular Korea\'s traditional food.
>>Kimchi is the most popular Korean traditional food.
Basic Kimchi is ship Kimchi.
>>Basic kimchi is called \'ship kimchi\'.
It is spicy and little salty.
>>It is spicy and a little salty.
And there are green onion Kimchi, cubed radish kimchi etc.
>>There are also green onion kimchi, cubed radish kimchi etc.
And second is Japchae.
>>Second is Japchae.
Japchae is making with meat, and many vegetable.
>>Japchae is made with meat, and many vegetables.
It is my favorite Korea traditional food.
>>Correct!
Finally, seaweed soup.
>>Finally, there is seaweed soup.
Seaweed soup is making with seaweed and meat.
>>Seaweed soup is made with seaweed and meat.
In past, people eat seaweed soup when they give birth to a baby.
>>In the past, people eat seaweed soup when they give birth to a baby.
And normal people can\'t eat meat, and they eat seaweed for blood.
>>And when some people can\'t eat meat, they eat seaweed for blood.
It is sad story.
>>It\'s a sad story.
And there are more Korea tradition food.
>>There are more Korea traditional food.
It is very delicous, and helpful food.
>>They are very delicious and healthy.
Please eat it!
>>Please try them!
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