Democracy depends on the voice of it people. What do you want to say to your president?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to say about the distribution of filtered mask. People have had difficulties to purchase masks which approved by authorized body that are effective to protect micro dust and virus due to novel corona virus spread nationwide. When we had a problem to buy mask at the beginning of crisis, the government didn\'t declare any way to distribute masks. However, the price of it went higher and higher because there was no a exact policy about distribution. After these troubled events, government decided to control the number of masks that people can buy at one time. So, every person only could buy it 2 piece of mask in one week. We are still in the rack of masks these days even pubic officers announced new improved policies. I can\'t understand that why government didn\'t distribute it at the public office after checking people\'s ID. I can understand a little bit about choices of public officers. We are living in the democratic country and the important value in here is that prices of goo
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, Mr. [이름]! How are you? I heard the cases in Korea are gradually decreasing.
Give me some updates during the class. Thanks for your homeworks, Sir. See you later1 ^^
~T.Avery
I want to say about the distribution of filtered mask.
>> I want to talk to him about the distribution of filtered mask.
People have had difficulties to purchase masks which approved by authorized body that are effective to protect micro dust and virus due to novel corona virus spread nationwide.
>> People have had difficulties to purchase masks, which had been approved by an authorized body and are effective to protect people from micro dust and virus, due to the novel corona virus spread nationwide.
When we had a problem to buy mask at the beginning of crisis, the government didn\'t declare any way to distribute masks.
>> When we had a problem buying masks at the beginning of the crisis, the government didn\'t declare any way to distribute masks.
However, the price of it went higher and higher because there was no exact policy about distribution.
>> CORRECT
After these troubled events, government decided to control the number of masks that people can buy at one time.
>> CORRECT
So, every person only could buy it 2 piece of mask in one week.
>> Therefore, every person could only buy 2 pieces of masks in one week.
We are still in the rack of masks these days even pubic officers announced new improved policies.
>> We are still in the rack of masks these days even when pubic officers announced the new and improved policies.
I can\'t understand that why government didn\'t distribute it at the public office after checking people\'s ID.
>> I can\'t understand why the government didn\'t distribute it at the public office after checking people\'s ID.
I can understand a little bit about choices of public officers.
>> I can understand a little bit about the choices made by public officers.
We are living in the democratic country and the important value in here is that prices of goo
>> We are living in a democratic country and an important value here is the prices of goods.
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