Dental clinic

Please correct my poor sentences Have a nice day and thank you I promised that if my son receive a dental treatment without complain, I will buy him the computer game CD. My son’s dental conditions are severe. he has some snaggletooth and because of his snaggletooth he could not shut his mouth firmly. Thanksfully, My cousin is a dentist and he started working in Se-Jong city 30 minute form my house. He said that he need to put on a certain device to adjust his tooth for two month. And the wrong positioned snaggletooth have to be pulled out. It sounds like horrible movie. I thought how I can he receive this horrible treatment without complain. My cousin said that he is going to give my son dental treatment for free. The only thing that I can do was allow my son’s recent wish

Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^ Thank you very much for sharing your experiences. I\'m glad to know that you\'ve been more expressive when using the English language. I think continuously studying and talking in English has helped you a lot in achieving that state. I also think that our class time is really short. Probably because I know that you have a lot of things to share and we have a lot of things to talk about. ^^ Receiving a dental treatment is quite expensive in my country. I think it\'s also the same in yours. You\'re lucky because your cousin is a dentist and he has agreed to give your son a free dental treatment. I think his dental case is also severe and it requires attention from an experienced dentist. My sister also had the same problem and she\'s been wearing braces for one and a half years now. We\'ve spent a fortune for her dental treatment though but we got the results we wanted. ^^ Anyhow, I think you\'re a sweet and caring father because you did your best to make this unpleasant experience into a pleasant one. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again tomorrow. ^^ ~Teacher Charry Please correct my poor sentences>> Please correct my poor sentences. (Don\'t forget your punctuations. ^^)Have a nice day and thank you >> Have a nice day and thank you. (Don\'t forget your punctuations. ^^)I promised that if my son receive a dental treatment without complain, I will buy him the computer game CD.>> I promised that if my son receives a dental treatment without a complaint, I will buy him the/a computer game CD.OR >> I promised that if my son receives a dental treatment without complaints, I will buy him the/a computer game CD that he wants.My son’s dental conditions are severe. >> CORRECT! OR >> My son has severe dental conditions. he has some snaggletooth and because of his snaggletooth he could not shut his mouth firmly.>> He has a snaggletooth and because of his snaggletooth he could not shut his mouth firmly.Thanksfully, My cousin is a dentist and he started working in Se-Jong city 30 minute form my house. >> Thankfully, my cousin is a dentist and he started working in Se-Jong city which is 30 minutes away form my house. He said that he need to put on a certain device to adjust his tooth for two month. >> He said that he needs to put on a certain device to adjust his tooth for two months. And the wrong positioned snaggletooth have to be pulled out. >> The snaggletooth has to be pulled out. OR >> The snaggletooth has to be removed. It sounds like horrible movie. >> It sounds like a horrible movie. I thought how I can he receive this horrible treatment without complain. >> I thought, how can he receive this horrible treatment without complaints? OR >> I asked myself, how can he receive this horrible treatment without complaints? My cousin said that he is going to give my son dental treatment for free. >> My cousin said that he is going to give my son a dental treatment for free. The only thing that I can do was allow my son’s recent wish >> The only thing that I can do was allow my son’s recent wish. (Don\'t forget your punctuations. ^^)