Dentist!
학생이 쓴 원문
I had been afraid to go to the dentist since I was young.
I hard tried to clean my teeth to avoid going the dentist.
As I got older, I couldn\'t help going to the dentist.
I pray to relax while I sit in the dentist\'s chair.
My dentist is kind and capable so that I feel safe and comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
There are some things to unpack in this composition.
Let\'s discuss it in class.
You have to be familiar with a continuous action.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I had been afraid to go to the dentist since I was young.
>> I have always been afraid to go to the dentist since I was young.
I hard tried to clean my teeth to avoid going the dentist.
I hard tried to clean my teeth to avoid going the dentist.
>> I have been trying to keep my teeth clean and healthy to avoid going the dentist.
As I got older, I couldn\'t help going to the dentist.
As I got older, I couldn\'t help going to the dentist.
>> Correct
I pray to relax while I sit in the dentist\'s chair.
I pray to relax while I sit in the dentist\'s chair.
>> Correct
My dentist is kind and capable so that I feel safe and comfortable.
My dentist is kind and capable so that I feel safe and comfortable.
>> My dentist is kind and capable so I feel safe and comfortable.
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