dentist
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I went to the dentist to check my right back tooth which was aching After he checked all of my teeth and said that my canines needed to repair contrary to my expectation.
I used to brush my teeth so strongly that the gums which covered the roots of my canines were worn out and almost removed and eventually start aching.
The dentist started to scratch away the remains of old patches from my canines which he had patched these parts up with artificial dentine several years ago. But those were also decayed now. I felt that the dentine was to be repaired but the day’s purpose to visit him was not of the canines but of my grinder on the right side. While he was scratching those remained dentine I felt like I was hit at my teeth with a hammer, but could not help enduring it.
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Hello,
You are very brave. I can't stand going to the dentist. I'm happy with how you wrote your sentences. If you would take a look at them, there are minor corrections. Good job
I went to the dentist to check my right back tooth which was aching.
>>I went to the dentist to have my right back tooth checked because it was aching.
After he checked all of my teeth and said that my canines needed to repair contrary to my expectation.>>After he checked all my teeth he said that my canines needed repair contrary to my expectation.
I used to brush my teeth so strongly that the gums which covered the roots of my canines were worn out and almost removed and eventually start aching.>>I used to brush my teeth so strongly that the gums covering the roots of my canines were worn out and almost removed and eventually started aching.The dentist started to scratch away the remains of old patches from my canines which he had patched these parts up with artificial dentine several years ago.
>>The dentist started to scrape away the remains of the old patches from my canines which he had patched up with artificial dentine several years ago.
But those were also decayed now.
>>correct^^
I felt that the dentine was to be repaired but the day’s purpose to visit him was not of the canines but of my grinder on the right side.
>>correct^^
While he was scratching those remained dentine I felt like I was hit at my teeth with a hammer, but could not help enduring it.
>>While he was scraping those remaining destines I felt like my teeth were hit with a hammer, but could not help but to endure it.
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