deny and appeal
학생이 쓴 원문
I am angry rhat rhe accused deny their wrongdoing and appeal.
Whenever I heard these news, I feel upset.
I have rarely seen perpetrators and the accused reflect and apologize.
This is sad because the morality and values of Koreans now.
강사 첨삭
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Aki~
I am angry rhat rhe accused deny their wrongdoing and appeal.
>>> I am angry that the accused denied her wrongdoing and appealed.
Whenever I heard these news, I feel upset.
>>> Whenever I hear this news, I feel upset.
I have rarely seen perpetrators and the accused reflect and apologize.
>>> CORRECT!
This is sad because the morality and values of Koreans now
>>> This is sad because the morality and values of Koreans now are declining.
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