Department store
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think it is something problem.
I can not make a sentenceby eng. in Mar.11.
But I knew, it was possible to make it in Mar.10
If it is being built department store in my hometown,
It is wonderful chance to me. If I have a house nearby it, house price will be going up and it is easy to shopping. First of all my wife will be happy to see building it
강사 첨삭
1. If it is being built department store in my hometown,It is wonderful chance to me.
>>If there is being built a department store in my hometown, it is a wonderful chance for me.
2. If I have a house nearby it, house price will be going up and it is easy to shopping.
>>If I have a house nearby it, the house price will be going up and it is easy to shopping.
3. First of all my wife will be happy to see building it
>>First of all, my wife will be happy to see the it being built.
Nice sentences.
- T. Melody ^^
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