Describe a beautiful morning in your city.
학생이 쓴 원문
The beautiful morning in my hometown is a very cold and very quite.
The my hometown is the best for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your first revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe a beautiful morning in your city.
The beautiful morning in my hometown is a very cold and very quite.
>>> The beautiful morning in my hometown is very cold and very quiet.
>>> OR: The mornings in my hometown are crisp, peaceful, and beautiful.
The my hometown is the best for me.
>>> My hometown is the best place for me.
>>> OR: It is the place where I feel most at home.
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