Describe a book, movie, or piece of music that has had a significant impact on you and why.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was twenty, I read a accounting principle book.
This book gave me significant impact for my life.
Because, it was begin for my major. and I still earn money through this skills.
So, this book is important for me.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! That was short and straight to the point. It is indeed a life-changing book for you.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
When I was twenty, I read a accounting principle book.
>> When I was twenty, I read an accounting principle book.
This book gave me significant impact for my life.
>> This book had a significant impact in my life.
Because, it was begin for my major. and I still earn money through this skills.
>> Because it was when my I started my major and up till now it has helped me build my skills to earn.
So, this book is important for me.
>> CORRECT
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