Describe a creative activity you enjoy.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many different kind of the creative activities.
Cooking is one of them.
When my children lived here, I used to cook with my family.
Depend on the recipe, ingredients,seasonings,sauces etc, people can taste various flavors .
I think it seems to be an art too.
These days,I cook open,but I don\'t enjoy it any more.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Good job on this.
You are becoming more expressive every day.
Keep it up.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are many different kind of the creative activities.>> There are many different kinds of creative activities.
Cooking is one of them.
>> Correct
When my children lived here, I used to cook with my family.
When my children lived here, I used to cook with my family.
>> When my children still lived with me, I used to cook with my family.
Depend on the recipe, ingredients,seasonings,sauces etc, people can taste various flavors .
I think it seems to be an art too.
Depend on the recipe, ingredients,seasonings,sauces etc, people can taste various flavors .
I think it seems to be an art too.
>> Depending on the recipe, ingredients, seasonings, sauces, etc., people can taste various flavors.
>> I think it seems to be an art, too.
These days,I cook open,but I don\'t enjoy it any more.
These days,I cook open,but I don\'t enjoy it any more.
>> These days, I cook often but I don\'t enjoy it any more.
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