Describe a custom in my country
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a custom in your country.
In chu[이름]k and [이름]llal, ancestral rites are held. All family prepared some food to put on the table. And then, all family bowed down.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Erica! Thank you for sharing about Chu[이름]k and [이름]llal! It sounds like a meaningful tradition, where family comes together to honor their ancestors with food and respectful bows. It must be a special time for everyone to connect and reflect.
~T. Jenna
In chu[이름]k and [이름]llal, ancestral rites are held.
Correct, or
>>During Chu[이름]k and [이름]llal, ancestral rites are ceremoniously conducted.
All family prepared some food to put on the table.
>> The whole family prepares food to place on the table.
OR
>>The entire family meticulously prepares offerings to be placed upon the ancestral altar.
And then, all family bowed down.
>>Then, the whole family bows down.
OR
>>Subsequently, the entire family performs a deep bow in respect.
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