Describe a day you faced a big [이름]llenge. How did you over come it?
학생이 쓴 원문
My very big bad [이름]llenge is I\'m going to school election because it is my first election.
So I\'m embarrassed.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your third revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe a day you faced a big [이름]llenge. How did you overcome it?
My very big bad [이름]llenge is I\'m going to school election because it is my first election.
>>> One of my biggest [이름]llenges was participating in a school election because it was my first time.
>>> OR: A major [이름]llenge for me was taking part in a school election for the first time, and it made me feel embarrassed.
So I\'m embarrassed.
>>> Because of this, I felt embarrassed.
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