Describe a family member you spend a lot of time with.
학생이 쓴 원문
After marriage,my family members are husband and two sons.
My two son have stayed abroad to stay for many years.
So I spend time with my husband .
He has dedicated to his work.
he likes to be outside and loves nature like flowers,trees,insects,sea,and plants.
I think, he seems to be a natural person...^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
It\'s been a while.
It\'s been a while.
I\'m glad you jumped right back to your routine.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
After marriage,my family members are husband and two sons.>> After marriage, my family members have been my husband and two sons.
My two son have stayed abroad to stay for many years.
My two son have stayed abroad to stay for many years.
>> My two sons have lived abroad for many years.
So I spend time with my husband .
So I spend time with my husband .
>> So, I spend most of my time with my husband.
He has dedicated to his work.
He has dedicated to his work.
>> He is dedicated to his work.
he likes to be outside and loves nature like flowers,trees,insects,sea,and plants.
he likes to be outside and loves nature like flowers,trees,insects,sea,and plants.
>> He likes being outdoors and loves nature like flowers, trees, insects, the sea, and plants.
I think, he seems to be a natural person...^^
I think, he seems to be a natural person...^^
>> Correct
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