Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country.
학생이 쓴 원문
There's some area called "EVER LAND" is most famous amusement park in Korea.
EVERLAND have a lot of amusement park rides and also it have big zoo.
And every day the special parades are held.
When I was in EVERLAND, I feel like I'm in the fairy tale.
That's why EVERLAND is the most favorite place for children.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jane!
I have heard about this amusement park before.
And I only heard good things about it.
I guess, it\'s also one of the main attractions in your country.
I hope I can visit there some day. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
>> There\'s an area called \"EVER LAND\" and it is the most famous amusement park in Korea.
EVER LAND have a lot of amusement park rides and also it have big zoo.
>> Everland has a lot of amusement park rides and also it has a big zoo.
And every day the special parades are held.
And every day the special parades are held.
>> correct
When I was in EVERLAND, I feel like I\'m in the fairy tale.
When I was in EVERLAND, I feel like I\'m in the fairy tale.
>> When I am in Everland, I feel like I\'m in the fairy tale.
>> or: When I was in Everland, I felt like I\'m in a fairy tale.
That\'s why EVERLAND is the most favorite place for children.
That\'s why EVERLAND is the most favorite place for children.
>> That\'s why Everland is the most favorite place of children.
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