Describe a friend\'s personality and why you enjoy spending time with them

2025-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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One of my best friends is 미선. She has a warm and cheerful personality. She\'s always positive, even in tough situations, and know how to make people laugh. I enjoy spending time with her because she\'s a great listener and gives thoughtful advice. Being around her always lifts my mood.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [Name]! I love how you described her, being positive even in tough times is such a rare and amazing quality. Your friendship sounds so genuine. It\'s awesome that you have someone like her to count on.
-T. Sonny 
One of my best friends is 미선. 
>>Correct!
She has a warm and cheerful personality.
>>Correct!
She\'s always positive, even in tough situations, and know how to make people laugh.
>>She\'s always positive, even in tough situations, and knows how to make people laugh.
I enjoy spending time with her because she\'s a great listener and gives thoughtful advice.
>>Correct!
Being around her always lifts my mood.
>>Correct! 
OR. She’s like a breath of fresh air on a heavy day.

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