Describe a friend who has played an important part in your life.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I heard this, I thought one person.
He is a my friend since I was a university student.
I learned a lot from him.
He is diligent, and his study method was better than me.
So, I borrow his study method and I finally got a good grade during university student.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing about your friend who has become an important part of your life.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
When I heard this, I thought one person. He is a my friend since I was a university student.
>> When I heard this, I thought of one person— my friend since my university days.
>> I learned a lot from him; he is diligent, and his study method was better than mine.
So, I borrow his study method and I finally got a good grade during university student.
>> So, I borrowed his study method, and I finally achieved good grades during university.
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