Describe a friend who you had at school.
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Hello Mini! Thank you dear for sending your essay. That is a nice friendship you have with that girl. You have to both take care of it because it\'s not easy to find a good friend these days.
~T. IRENE~
I would like to describe a friend of mine who met in a college.
>>> I would like to describe a friend of mine who I met in a college.
I entered the college 2 years later than her so I\'m older so I thought we couldn\'t be a best friend like this but she is a very charming and outgoing person.
>>> I entered college 2 years earlier than her so I\'m older. I thought we couldn\'t be best friends because of that but she is a very charming and outgoing so we became very close.
It wasn\'t big deal how could become a best friend.
>>> Our age gap was not a big deal for us becoming best friends.
She is taller than me and bigger than my hands and feet.
>>> She is taller than me and has bigger hands and feet.
So when we are walking together she looks like my old sister.
>>> So when we are walking together she looks like my older sister.
We have a lot in common such as humor, taste of food and hobbies.
>>> We have a lot in common such as humor, taste in food and hobbies.
So we talked a bit and became more closer.
>>> So we talked a bit and became closer.
We did it something a lot whice were worked a same place like pub, and our assignment.
>>> We met a lot and did things together like go to the pub or finish an assignment.
Having our assignment, she\'s got an leadership so she towared ours more good way.
>>> While working together, I have noticed that she has a leadership ability.
And now, we still are seeing often.
>>> Until now, we often see each other.
We still maintaine our friendship in good condition and I hope we can be the best friend like this forever.
>>> We have still maintained a close friendship that I hope will last forever.
>>> We are still friends until now and I hope it will stay that way forever.
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