Describe a good memory you had when you were young.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I young. I played with my freind in the playground.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji Han,
Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the good work!
~T. Demi ^^
When I young. I played with my freind in the playground.
>> When I was young, I played with my friends in the playground.
Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the good work!
~T. Demi ^^
When I young. I played with my freind in the playground.
>> When I was young, I played with my friends in the playground.
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