Describe a historical event that interests you.
학생이 쓴 원문
It was martial law that was declared by President Yoon a year ago.
At that time, everyone didn\'t want to accept it, but it was real.
In the end, the people and National Assembly bravely prevented it .
The President was impeached, is in jail and on trial.
It\'s December ,3,tonight.
강사 첨삭
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It was martial law that was declared by President Yoon a year ago.
>> Correct
At that time, everyone didn\'t want to accept it, but it was real.
At that time, everyone didn\'t want to accept it, but it was real.
>> Correct
In the end, the people and National Assembly bravely prevented it .
In the end, the people and National Assembly bravely prevented it .
>> Correct
The President was impeached, is in jail and on trial.
The President was impeached, is in jail and on trial.
>> The President was impeached and is now in jail and on trial.
It\'s December ,3,tonight.
It\'s December ,3,tonight.
>> It’s the night of December 3.
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